From f7bd52ac0c53f1b8213f10638c1890fccfe35b97 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: cyalins <cyalins@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 25 Jan 2018 13:46:08 +1100
Subject: [PATCH] Improved clarity of crowdfunding message

---
 browser/main/modals/PreferencesModal/Crowdfunding.js | 12 ++++++------
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/browser/main/modals/PreferencesModal/Crowdfunding.js b/browser/main/modals/PreferencesModal/Crowdfunding.js
index 3dccd27b..048520b0 100644
--- a/browser/main/modals/PreferencesModal/Crowdfunding.js
+++ b/browser/main/modals/PreferencesModal/Crowdfunding.js
@@ -22,18 +22,18 @@ class Crowdfunding extends React.Component {
     return (
       <div styleName='root'>
         <div styleName='header'>Crowdfunding</div>
-        <p>Dear all,</p>
+        <p>Dear everyone,</p>
         <br />
-        <p>Thanks for your using!</p>
-        <p>Boostnote is used in about 200 countries and regions, it is a awesome developer community.</p>
+        <p>Thank you for using Boostnote!</p>
+        <p>Boostnote is used in about 200 different countries and regions by an awesome community of developers.</p>
         <br />
         <p>To continue supporting this growth, and to satisfy community expectations,</p>
-        <p>we would like to invest more time in this project.</p>
+        <p>we would like to invest more time and resources in this project.</p>
         <br />
-        <p>If you like this project and see its potential, you can help!</p>
+        <p>If you like this project and see its potential, you can help by supporting us on OpenCollective!</p>
         <br />
         <p>Thanks,</p>
-        <p>Boostnote maintainers.</p>
+        <p>Boostnote maintainers</p>
         <br />
         <button styleName='cf-link'>
           <a href='https://opencollective.com/boostnoteio' onClick={(e) => this.handleLinkClick(e)}>Support via OpenCollective</a>