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 on underpowered ereaders with small storage capacities.
 
 KCC avoids many common formatting issues (some of which occur [even on the Kindle Store](bad_formatting_examples.md)), such as:
-1) incorrect black levels, which can make manga look very faded and hard to see on eink, which is already lower contrast than LCD.
+1) faded black levels causing unneccessarily low contrast, which is hard to see and can cause eyestrain.
 2) unneccessary margins at the bottom of the screen due to screen resolution assumptions or reading progress bars
 3) incorrect page turn direction for manga that's read right to left
 4) unaligned two page spreads in landscape, where pages are shifted over by 1